Saturday, 25 May 2013

WALT: use story language to start our stories.


WALT. Use story language to start our stories.

Once upon a time, in a deep dark wood, in teeny tiny cottage with a straw roof lived a big rat his name was pepper- tree .
He dressed in  warm clothes because it was june. One day he went outside to play. Then Lightning and thunder came and the ground started to shake so pepper-tree ran into his cottage.

The end.

1 comment:

  1. amazing work reefton. That was like me I was close to lightning and thunder. Why did he have to wear warm stuff?

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